Thursday, February 18, 2016

Analysis Essay: 1st Draft

Rujian, Zhou
2/14/2016
True Strength
What is true strength? I think that the true strength is not just simple as a great power of people, but the ability to overcome ourselves and protect the people we love. Both of Lorenzo in Me And You and Hank Palmer in The Judge show their true strength in those ways. They change from antisocial and ruthless people to grown men who willing to help other; they learn that the true strength comes from firm mind in improving themselves, challenging themselves, as well as protect those people they love. The power of love is always the strongest that can help you overcome a lot of difficulties.
Even though there are many differences between a movie and a novel, the story and the main points of them can be the same. The novel Me And You and the movie The Judge have a lot common in their ideas.
Firstly, the novel Me And You is about an Italian boy Lorenzo who a very empathetic person who only thinking about himself. He thinks that people around him are “Others”, which “The others were anyone who wasn't my mum, my father and grandma Laura” (Ammaniti 24). So Lorenzo seldom think for other people because they are irrelevant of him. Furthermore, Lorenzo lied to his mother about he will go to a ski week with his classmate Alessia Roncato who is very popular in class. To continue this lie, Lorenzo makes a very detailed and thoughtful plan, he hides in the basement under for his “ski week”. He stores foods, water and PlayStation in the cellars, he treats his mother let him go to Alessia’ house alone, and finally he returns in the basement without anybody know. We can know that Lorenzo is a very talented boy, he has the ability to design the plan and succeed the plan. When he tries to trick his mother, he thinks “I had one last card to play” (Ammaniti, p17), he is a very deep and scheming thinking person. Even though Lorenzo has some great talents, he never thinks about other people.
After that, Lorenzo meets Olivia, who is his step sister and the person who makes him changes and let he know his value in the world. Olivia was a very beautiful girl when Lorenzo met her two years ago, Lorenzo thinks that “Instead she was incredibly beautiful, one of those girls that as soon as you look at them your face burns red and everybody knows you think she is beautiful” (Ammaniti 70). But she loses a lot weights and seems to have heavy illness now. Olivia is suffered by drugs, she is a heroin addict. Olivia seems to be the girl who also do not not how to deal with other people like Lorenzo. At the beginning, Lorenzo thinks Olivia is very annoyed, because she vomiting, scathing herself as well as she break his “perfect plan”.  But after staying with Olivia in the cellar for a few days, Lorenzo feels pity to Olivia because Lorenzo finds out that he and Olivia shares many things in common. Such as they both have problem with their family, school and society. Olivia keeps in poor health and she is dying. Lorenzo sees Olivia like her grandmother Laura who is dying in hospital. Lorenzo feels helpless because he can not do anything for grandma Laura. So he decide to find medicine for Olivia to show his strength. This is the first time that Lorenzo thinks about others, he comes out from his little world in the basement and tried to save his sister’s life with the dangerous of expose his lie. Even though it is just a small event that Lorenzo goes finding medicine and saves Olivia, Lorenzo show his love towards Olivia. In addition, Lorenzo also shows his braves and intelligence in the process of finding medicines. Such as sneak into hospital and go back to basement without let Silver Monkey know. Lorenzo comes out from his comfort zone, and use his power to save the person he cares about. After he gets the medicine for Olivia, Olivia becomes much better. And Lorenzo feels very proud of himself and gains confidence. Lorenzo knows his value that he can save someone’s life, and he success in doing that. This is the beginning of Lorenzo’s changes.
10 years latter Lorenzo become more talkative and mature. When he meets with Olivia, he talks and treats to other people politely, like a gentleman. Lorenzo says to the waitress very politely, like “Thank you” (Ammaniti 5), as well as to the man at the last“Can I stay with her” (Ammaniti 152). In my opinion, he changes from the merciless wired boy to a responsible grown up man. Then he knows the true strength is not used to fool his mother but to take cave his family, the people who he loves. This changes not only comes from his regrets about his grandma Laura, but also his personal courage and passion on save the person he love. I think what Lorenzo shows in the story is the true strength, and it is very brave of him to save his sister.

Sunday, February 14, 2016

Critical Analysis Essay: Me And You & The Judge

Rujian, Zhou
2/14/2016
True Strength
What is true strength? I think that true strength is not just simple as great power of people, but the ability to overcome ourselves and protect people we love. The main characters in the novel Me And You and the movie The Judge show their true strength in those ways. Both of Lorenzo in Me And You and Hank Palmer in The Judge change from antisocial and ruthless people to grown men who willing to help other; they learn that the true strength comes from firm mind in improving themselves, challenge themselves to come out of their comfort zone, as well as protect those people they love. The power of life is always the strongest that can help you overcome a lot of difficulties.
Even though there are many differences between a movie and a novel, the story and the main points of their writers can be the same. The novel Me And You and the movie The Judge have a lot common in their ideas.
The novel Me And You tells about how an Italian boy Lorenzo changes because of saving his half sister Olivia. In the story, Lorenzo is a very emphatic person who only thinking about himself. He thinks that people around him are “Others”, which “The others were anyone who wasn't my mum, my father and grandma Laura” (Ammaniti, p24). Lorenzo seldom think for other people because they are irrelevant of him. Furthermore, Lorenzo lied to his mother about he will go to a ski week with his classmate Alessia Roncato who is very popular in class. To continue this lie, Lorenzo made a very detailed and thoughtful plan, which he will hide in the basement under his house for the ski week. He stores foods, water and PlayStation in the cellars, he treats his mother let him go to Alessia’ house alone, and finally he returns in the basement without anybody know. We can know that Lorenzo is a very talented boy, he has the ability to design the plan and succeed the plan. When he tries to trick his mother, he thinks “I had one last card to play” (Ammaniti, p17), he is a very deep and scheming thinking person.
After that, Lorenzo plan keeps going well until an uninvited person shows up, which is Lorenzo’s step sister Olivia. Olivia was a very beautiful girl when Lorenzo met her two years ago. But Olivia lose a lot weights and seems to have heavy illness with her now. Olivia is suffered by drugs, she is a heroin addict. At the beginning, Lorenzo thinks Olivia is very annoyed, because she vomiting, scathing herself as well as she break his “perfect plan”.  But after staying with Olivia in the cellar for a few days, Lorenzo feels pity to Olivia because both of they have problems with dealing with other people as well as studying in school.
Then Lorenzo can not bear with Olivia keeps in poor health anymore, and he also sees Olivia like her grandmother Laura. Grandma Laura is so sick that she is dying, and Lorenzo can not do anything for her. So he decide to find medicine for her. This is the first time that Lorenzo thinks about others, he comes out from his little world in the basement and tried to save his sister’s life, with the dangerous of expose his lie to his mother. Here, Lorenzo makes one of the biggest decision in his life and it is also where Lorenzo changes. Lorenzo would not help other people like this before, this is the first time that he comes out from his comfort zone, and cares about others from his heart. After he gets the medicine for Olivia, both Olivia and Lorenzo celebrates, and have a little party. They talks about their past stories in a lake and dance together. I think this is the first time that Lorenzo opens his mind to talks with others, he changes step by step. Olivia promised to Lorenzo that she won't take drugs anymore, and left a note to Lorenzo before she’s gone. At the end of the story, Olivia dies because of an overtake 10 years latter. When Lorenzo comes to see her last time, Lorenzo becomes very mutual. He talks and treats to other people politely, like a gentleman. After the days in cellar with Olivia, Lorenzo changes from the merciless wired boy to a responsible grown up man. After Lorenzo meets with Olivia, he definitely changes. This changes not only comes from his regret about feels helpless and useless about his grandma Laura's sick, but also his personal courage and passion on save the person he love. I think what Lorenzo shows in the story is the true strength.

Friday, February 12, 2016

Yubin's Thesis Statement

The novel Me And You and the film Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind portrays two main character Lurenzo and XXX hope to find true love in their lives, and the hopes support them to improve themselves into open minded, carrying people.

Thursday, February 11, 2016

Thesis Statement 2

Thesis statement:

Both Lorenzo in the Book Me And You and Hank Palmer in the movie The Judge change from antisocial and ruthless people to the people who willing to help other and grown up; they learn that the true strength comes from firm mind in improving themselves as well as protecting the people they care very much.

Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Analysis Essay Thesis Statement & Outline

Rujian, Zhou
2/10/2016
Me And You: Analysis Essay Outline
Thesis statement:
The story of Me And You and The Judge tells our not only how the main character Lorenzo and Hank change, but also about their struggles with their family and the people who they love. They challenge themselves, get out of their comfort zones to face their problems, in order to save the people they loves. It is true that the power of love is unstoppable.

Outline:
1st Paragraph
  • Introduction: Brief summary about the story of Me And You and The Judge
  • Thesis Statement

2nd Paragraph
  • Connecting with Introduction (1st Paragraph)
  • Summary about Me And You. Talks about the main line of the story, the main characters Lorenzo and Olivia. Pay more attention on the process of changing of Lorenzo (What happen to Lorenzo and what does he change.)
3rd Paragraph
  • Analysis of Me And You. Why Lorenzo changes and what does Olivia do in the process
  • The days with Olivia in the cellar make Lorenzo changes from the antisocial little boy to a helpful, grown up young man. Lorenzo realizes how weak he is when his grandmother Laura gets sick, so he decides to help his sister Olivia who is tormented by drugs.
4th Paragraph
  • Started a new chapter about movie The Judge.
  • Summary of The Judge. The main Characters: Hank Palmer, who is a lawyer only cares about money; Hank’s father, the town judge Joseph Palmer. What happen to them: Hank’s father is charged for a murder in the town and Hank tries to let his father “Not guilty in his way” What does Hank change: Hank becomes a good lawyer with justice like his father at the end.
5th Paragraph
  • Analysis The Judge
  • Why Hank changes and how he changes
  • The struggles between Hank and his Father (Believe and obey in Law or not)
6th Paragraph
  • Analysis between two movies, Me And You and The Judge
  • What does the main characters share in commence
  • What change them (The faith of helping people they love)
7th Paragraph
  • Restate the thesis statement
  • Conclusion of the body paragraphs
  • What do both of the story tell us
  • What I think I learn from the stories
  • Advice for the future


End

Snow Day Poem

Happy Snow Day

There is a wonderful holiday only happens in winter
It is the holy snow day
Check your email every morning before classes
Maybe you have a snow day!
Enjoy the hot chocolate, the snowman and the snow angel in the day
There will be no class, no sports and no tests
Be free to stay up late in this sleepy holiday
And have fun in playing snow at the freezing weather
Even though it is inconvenient, dirty and slippery, it is joyful to have a free day in home for students
Enjoy yourself in the white snow, and happy snow day! 

Wednesday, February 3, 2016

Movie Summary: The Judge

There are so many movies in the world these days, but only of few of them can really touch people's feeling. The Judge is one of those good movies. It is a movie that describes not only the story but the people in the story.
In the movie, it tells a story about Hank Palmer. Hank works as a lawyer in city. He has great talent about this job, he wins many trails for his clients. But he is not a good lawyer, he works mostly for money. So he willing to defense for bad people against justice and gets a great deal of money for return. Because of this, Hank has a bad relationship with his father Joseph Palmer, who is the judge of Hank's hometown. Hank's father is the opposite of him, Joseph Palmer is the most loyalty person to the law. He works as a judge, but none of his cases are judged wrong. He also helps those people who made mistake continue their lives. Because all of judge Joseph Palmer's good works, he has great reputation in the town.
But suddenly, Hank's mother passes away. Hank has to go back to his hometown for the funeral. At the funeral, Hank meets his father, but both of them treat each other like strangers. Then judge Joseph is charged for killing a pervasive defendant. Hank's brother convinces Hank to defense his father. In the process, Hank and his father have a lot conflicts. For example, Hank think law is nothing, so he can lie, trick and fake in the court to get his father not guilty. But his father thinks law is the every thing, if there are enough evidence to judge him guilty, then he will admit his guilty. In the processes of investigation, Hank knows more about his father. He overcomes the biggest struggles that goes with him for a long time: why his father never pays attention(Love) to him. Then he knows that his father is actually loves him, more than anyone else. His father keeps Hank away because he does not want Hank become a bad person like the defendant. After being for a long time with his father, Hank releases that his father is the most and very integrity. Hank changes a lot in this event. When he comes back to city, he is not the lawyer who willing to help bad people escape from judgements. He becomes justice and integrity just like his father.
So the story of The Judge is about Hank and his father in this murder case. But the movie pay attention to Hank as a person. There are many scenes that describes the conflicts between Hank and his father, as well as the struggling of Hank. At the end, Hank changes to a person like his father, he learns many things from his father and inherits from his father. It is one of the best movies I saw last year.